Mock Shoot Feedback and self reflection

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 After showing my mock shoot to my teacher, she gave me a few pointers on where she thought I could improve on my opening sequence. I also sat back and looked at my opening, deciding where and what I could change things up.

Below were the changes I decided to make based on feedback and my own self-reflection.

  1. Change the composition of shots in the scene where Alyssa takes her bag and looks at her wall with pictures as the ones I had used did not mesh well.
  2. Change the opening with the alarm clock to directly start with it ringing as it would start the sequence off with a lively note.
  3. Add more greenery to the mis - en - scene.
  4. Change the location of the bathroom.

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