Creating a Storyboard for my Film Opening based on the earlier written Script

 I was advised to create a storyboard based on my earlier script, to get a clearer and better understanding of my camerawork and mis-en-scene for my film opening. My art skills are average at best, but I have it my best shot 

Below is my first attempt at a storyboard

Creating this storyboard really helped bring out what I had visualized in my head for this film opening. However, I realized that until I do a mock shoot, I won't be able to finalize this as I haven't properly filmed with these shots and angles, and I can't take this storyboard as a final one. So I decided to take this as a draft script